The Legend of Black Shuck (Part Three)
- S P Clark
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So here it is! The final part of S P Clark's poetic retelling of the folklore tale of Black Shuck. It is suggested that you read the sections in order so,
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The Legend of Black Shuck
S P Clark
This recrudescence came to pass,
a scream so shrill it shattered glass,
but screaming brought assistance none
as quicker than a top it spun
and lunged towards dear Elias
who shan’t be spared. Being pious
may have brought him peace and guidance,
but his screaming filled with stridence
proved that his God would not assist.
Elias wanted to untwist
himself from this situation;
the underworld’s damned Alsatian.
Destiny he could not escape,
take his chance beneath this moonscape.
As Elias struggled to stand,
grasping at the floor with his hand
and finding nothing firm to grip,
down the dune he started to slip.
Right then Black Shuck’s eye glowed brighter,
he lunged again, little blighter;
no warning growl, no muscle flex.
What must have Reed done to perplex
the spirits so, that he should be fought?
Nothing deserving this onslaught!
As the hellhound soared in the air,
Elias Reed could but despair
at the ending sure to befall;
cold sweats of terror through it all.
Black Shuck savagely landed down,
making our poor Elias drown
in the flecks of phlegm it drips out.
Reed’s voice is hidden, cannot shout.
Enormous weight of hateful foe,
crushed his bones from his head to toe
and Elias struggled to find air,
his lungs were smashed beyond repair.
Giant weight pushed him in the dirt,
now fading fast and not alert.
Before Reed could drift off to rest
Shuck gnashed not his throat but his chest,
biting, tearing, ribcage apart,
Black Shuck was aiming for his heart.
Elias underneath the beast,
knowing soon that he’ll be deceased,
was surprised by the lack of pain,
no stinging flesh that ebbs and wanes.
Instead he felt a tug, a pull,
his discomfort was now brimful
as his heart’s hanging by a thread;
empty thoughts, clear mind, worries shed.
As one last tug starts to sever,
Reed saw not sky, road, whatever
he thought he might see, no such things
came to be; darkness as it sings.
Endless blackness was his last view
as he convulsed, fractured in two.
Elias, in darkness of death,
saw the bleakness of losing breath,
but if he peered into the deep
he’d see one eye never asleep,
oozing red and locking his sight
in his cold resting place that night.
The blackness is the matted fur;
entwined hairs trying all to confer
and convey the darkness today
will linger on another way.
The teeth will soon become the stars
that shine down ‘pon the inns and bars
and Elias will know no more
than he died in fear ‘pon the floor.
Silence was replaced by a storm,
it rained in sheets and folk kept warm
in houses by their fires burning,
eating food with stomachs churning.
The sand-road clear apart from Reed,
torrential rain cleans those in need
of all that’s rotten and decays.
The sky, with lightening, now displays
an electrifying vision,
a bright heavenly excision
of all the ills that came before.
There’s always truth within folklore,
but, dear reader, you have to seek
out truth from those that daring speak.
Reader, you’ll surely want to know
how it all ends and where to go;
Reed was found by a local man
who lives his life the best he can.
He quick sent for a priest to come
minutes before the morning sun
had risen from eastern shadow.
The priest fast across the meadow
came, but said “I won’t bury him
on consecrated ground, no Jim!”
He soft looked down and saw Reed’s face
and said, “perhaps prayer might embrace
him, and let a burial good
take place somewhere out in the wood.”
In the weeks that then came after
chatter heard from roof and rafter
of just how did Elias die,
the fairy tales would make you cry.
Even though you now know it all,
please don’t shout it from hall to hall,
keep it locked deep inside your heart
and if not, careful how you start
to tell the story of Black Shuck,
of how Elias lost his luck.
You see, Black Shuck’s always waiting
in the sky, anticipating
a time to be unforgiving,
to take their breath, stop them living.
© S P Clark

